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Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Steinbeck anniversary...

October 25, 1962
The Nobel Prize Goes to...
Acclaimed American novelist John Steinbeck is awarded Nobel Prize in Literature for his “realistic and imaginative writing, combining as it does sympathetic humor and keen social perception.” Born and raised in the Salinas Valley region of California, he is perhaps best known for his novels that recount the hardships of the working class during the Great Depression of the 1930s, such as Of Mice and Men and The Grapes of Wrath. Over the course of his career, Steinbeck plies his pen as a playwright, screenwriter and war correspondent, and will see musical mavens Rodgers and Hammerstein turn his novel Sweet Thursday into their 1955 show Pipe Dream. Of his Nobel Prize, Steinbeck writes a friend, “This prize business is only different from the Lettuce Queen of Salinas in degree.”

Friday, October 7, 2011

Hemingway's Treasure Trove Part Two

It took 20 minutes to get to the Finca—as we drove up the gentle rise to San Francisco de Paula, and then farther up a long approach. Atop several large terraced steps perches the gracious cream-colored house, with its small, square-columned portico and its windows trimmed in white. Big palms across the property fanned an azure sky on what was already a hot morning, and dark-green areca fronds cascaded at the entrance. Each day the Finca receives 150 visitors, who are not allowed inside the house; but many of them were already walking its perimeter, getting a look into every room, as each featured a large window. Gladys and the museum staff welcomed us, letting us past the rope at the front door.
The Cubans obviously consider the house a shrine, and they have frozen it in time. The floors were polished, the windows were immaculate, and any sudden movements toward a piece of furniture excited guards into motion. The large, breezy living room was without pretense, with Papa’s favorite reading chair and its mate dominating the salon. Between them sat a small table, with provisions for cocktails exactly as Hemingway had left them—bottles of Schweppes Indian Tonic, Gordon’s gin, Old Forester bourbon, Campari, Bacardi rum, and El Copey Agua Mineral. A few other chairs and small tables filled the rest of the room; bookcases, paintings, bullfighting posters, and trophies from Africa and the American West covered the walls. The musical tastes of our absent host—as evidenced by the record collection—could not have been more mainstream: Benny Goodman, Tommy Dorsey, and Glenn Miller; Bach, Beethoven, and Brahms; Granados from Spain and Lecuona from Cuba.

All the other rooms in the house were barely adorned, and each provided insights. The workroom that was part of his bedroom suite, for example, showcased the Royal typewriter on which he had hammered out much of his work from 1939 on. The connecting bathroom had a doctor’s scale, and on one of the walls, Hemingway had recorded his weight daily. It ranged from 242 pounds on February 21, 1955, to 190 1/2 pounds five years later.

The most revealing items throughout the house were the books—almost 9,000 of them, many with marginalia. A copy of the Oxford Book of English Prose caught my eye, as I had suddenly remembered a letter Hemingway had sent Max Perkins in April 1940, when he was looking for a title for his nearly finished novel about Spain. He liked to leaf through anthologies of English literature, and upon reaching John Donne’s “Meditation XVII”—the one that said, “Never send to know for whom the bell tolls”—he had written that he had found his title. Or, he asked Perkins, would people think of tolls as long-distance charges and Bell as the telephone company? I asked one of the guards if I might inspect the book. In an act of great trust, he removed it from its place and carefully handed it to me. I thumbed through the pages until I found the passage—circled.

After touring the house, we asked when and where we might see Hemingway’s papers. Gladys Rodríguez suggested only that we explore the grounds. We visited the four-story tower Mary had built for her husband (hoping he might use the top floor as his workroom, which he did not); we ambled down the palm-lined paths among the nine acres to the shed that housed his cruiser, the Pilar; and we saw the emptied swimming pool, which in its splashier days had hosted a number of actors from film adaptations of his books—Spencer Tracy, Errol Flynn, Gary Cooper (who had brought Patricia Neal), and Ava Gardner, who had famously skinny-dipped there. Seeing the sights was informative and perfectly pleasant, but as we baked in the hot sun outside the unattached garage, Frank Phillips grumbled, “We still haven’t seen any papers.” He believed we were sitting but yards from our treasure trove—right there, he imagined, in the basement of the garage.

Another day had passed without any indication that we would be seeing any documents. We dined at El Floridita, “the cradle of the daiquiri” and a favorite haunt of Hemingway’s. Gladys Rodríguez joined us, along with Enrique Cirules, a celebrated Cuban author, who had written about Hemingway. He spoke with a pronounced Cuban accent, which dropped a lot of consonants and made him difficult to understand. I thought at first that the problem was the rustiness of my Spanish after a few decades of disuse, but Sandy Spanier said she had trouble comprehending him as well. But after dinner, we all strolled toward the Malecón as Cirules held forth on Hemingway and Havana. And suddenly, Sandy—a few rum drinks for the better, I presumed—was not only gabbing away with him but also understanding every syllable, simultaneously translating for the rest of us.

The next day, I was separated from the pack and sent to meet administrators of the Instituto Cubano del Libro. Officials of the publishing industry asked if I would return to Cuba to attend some literary conferences, and did I want to speak to the press that day about America’s policy toward Cuba? While I felt 40 years of malignant neglect had done nothing to bring Castro down and seemed only to make every Cuban I encountered even more patriotic, I thought it best to keep my opinions to myself. Later that morning, Enrique Cirules and I spent time interviewing each other about our respective lives and careers. (“We are a Third World country,” he affirmed, “but the best in the Third World.”) And as the authorities at the Hemingway Museum still had said nothing about our seeing any papers, I spent the afternoon visiting museums and walking through El Parque Central, where locals flock every day to argue about baseball. As the next day was our last opportunity to see any papers, our team strategized over dinner, deciding that I should bell the cat.
By morning, however, that seemed unnecessary. We were summoned to the Finca and told that we would be seeing documents. To our surprise, we were taken to a shed by the pool, where doors were opened, revealing stacks of papers. We were elated … until we realized they were not Hemingway’s. They were, in fact, detailed inventories of the museum’s holdings—handwritten by curators over the years. A description of each document was recorded on a separate sheet of cheap paper, many of which literally crumbled in our hands. Clearly, there had been some great misunderstanding. Sandy and I were grateful to see this much, startled by all that seemed to have been stored; but Jenny and Frank groused that we still did not know for a fact where the actual documents were and when we would see them. The clock was ticking, especially as we had a four-o’clock appointment with Marta Arjona that afternoon. Sometime around noon, I approached Gladys and thanked her for all the hospitality she had extended, but I explained that our trip really was a squandered opportunity unless we could see some papers immediately. I believe each of the others had similar conversations with her.
A little after one, Gladys escorted us back to the garage, but this time through the low gate marked acceso limitado. There, at the rear of the building, a small door opened to steep stairs down into a basement. I guess the room was about 15 by 30 feet, and I’m sure it was a hair over six feet high, as my head brushed against the ceiling. Frank had to stoop the entire time we were there. Under the watchful eyes of two overseers, we four filed in.
It was a clean, badly lighted place. Five bulbs illuminated the space from above; a sixth had burned out. The curators took pride in having been good custodians, pointing out the dehumidifier in the room and two Samsung portable air conditioners, which ran 24 hours a day. But one couldn’t help noticing an opening in a wall that had been boarded over, through which light passed. That meant insects and rain and dust could permeate as well; but the shortage of time kept us from dwelling on such problems. From the inventory, Sandy and I especially had compiled lists of must-see items, core samples that would indicate the breadth and depth of this collection.
The cellar was jammed with file cabinets as well as firearms and horned animal heads and photographs; and while the interests of my colleagues ranged from correspondence to curios, I used most of my time to comb through folders that pertained to Hemingway’s writing career, anything that might illustrate the author’s creative process. In an instant, I felt as though I had entered King Tut’s tomb; literary riches abounded. There was a five-page fragment that ended up in Death in the Afternoon and a five-line exchange of dialogue intended for Islands in the Stream that had not seen the light of day; there was a snatch of World War II-vintage dialogue that Hemingway had hunt-and-pecked on his Royal typewriter—raw stuff which he had evidently meant to spin into fiction but which he ultimately judged “too frank”; galley No. 10 of Across the River and into the Trees bore author’s revisions; pristine pages of The Old Man and the Sea did not.

I remembered from my research that Hemingway had had second thoughts about the ending of For Whom the Bell Tolls, how at the last minute he thought it should include an epilogue accounting for the supporting players. Perkins had read the proposed coda, and, knowing Hemingway’s preference for minimalism, he had urged the author to drop the pages. He had backed his opinion by citing his daughter Peggy, with whom he had shared the manuscript. She had said the book had ended perfectly without it. Perkins had evidently returned those final pages to the author, because they did not exist among his papers Stateside. But there in an old file in the basement of the garage at the Finca Vigía remained a 12-page pencil draft of those very pages. As I quickly related that publishing anecdote, I handed the folder to Jenny Phillips, Peggy’s daughter.

With an eye on the clock, because of our appointment with Marta Arjona, I frantically sprinted through a few folders of personal material, which proved to be as revealing as anything I had ever seen relating to the Hemingways’ marriage. In my notebook, I scribbled some passages from love letters Ernest had sent to Mary during the war; and then, in another folder, I found a startling statement written less than 10 years later: “Right now the question is whether I should accept Mary as a scold and give up another illusion,” it said. “Or whether I should ride along and learn not to give a damn.” Oddly, Ernest had appended a note to Mary, saying he had jotted these thoughts to “clarify something in my head.” Then, even more astonishing, he added, “Please return them.”

Time was up—before I could study the folder of letters from Adriana Ivancich, the young Venetian aristocrat who had served as the model for the hero’s inamorata in Across the River and into the Trees … or Hemingway’s instructions for the cook on how to prepare his salads … or his letter to Ingrid Bergman, whom he hoped would play Maria in the film of For Whom the Bell Tolls …
We had come to Cuba hoping to find a few literary artifacts. Instead, we found ourselves amid a most significant literary dig, surrounded by “wonderful things.” We had already identified enough significant pieces of quotidian life at the Finca to begin to understand Hemingway’s 20 years there. As we drove back to Havana to report our findings and discuss the future of the documents, I could think only of the serious and solitary artist who lived there, not the swaggering figure of myth. “Writing at its best,” Hemingway had confessed in his Nobel acceptance speech, “is a lonely life.” I had never fully appreciated how that sentiment applied to him until I had processed all that I had seen at the Finca Vigía—from the tower top to the basement.
Now, 50 years after Hemingway’s death, the Finca is being rehabilitated and its holdings are being protected. More than 3,000 pages of documents from the cellar have already been conserved, scanned, digitized, and made accessible to the public through the J.F.K. Library. And documents from that archive can now be included in the long-anticipated volumes of Hemingway’s collected letters.

Their value cannot be overstated. Where Hemingway’s published works had all been so deliberate and painstakingly chiseled, his letters were free-form and expansive—unsanded and unvarnished. “I would write one true sentence, and then go on from there,” he famously said of the process he had applied to a lifetime of literary efforts. In the final analysis, however, his letters may prove to be the most honest log of Hemingway’s fascinating life-voyage, the truest sentences he ever wrote.

The following letters, none of which has been previously published, are from The Letters of Ernest Hemingway: Volume 1, 1907–1922, edited by Sandra Spanier and Robert W. Trogdon. The remaining 15 volumes will be released over the next 20 years. Though adapted for the magazine, Hemingway’s misspellings and punctuation have been preserved.


In this letter to his father, Dr. Clarence Hemingway, 18-year-old Ernest detailed the joys and pains of hard work at The Kansas City Star. Having brushed off the prospect of attending college, he was seeking instead to pursue the career in journalism he had started at the Trapeze, his high school’s weekly newspaper. Though he would be at The Star just six months, he adopted a style of terse declarative prose that would stay with him the rest of his life. (Notes by Jaime Lalinde)


To Clarence Hemingway
April 16 1918
Dear Old Pop:
How are you?… This is the way things are lined up at present. I have been down here about seven months, granted. Until lately I have neen making not enough to live on. See High Cost of Living figures. I am only a kid of nearly 19 granted, and have been hitting the pace pretty blame hard. Working in competetion with men with threee to ten years more experience than I have. I have had to work like sin and have concentrated about three years work into one. Through good luck and some natural ability I have been able to get onto the game pretty well. In fact I have been having better assignments than a number of men from three to 8 years older than I am. and according to the way they are letting my stuff get by I am making good. I am now drawing $75 per month, the Star by a rule layed down by Col. Nelson [publisher of the Star], only gives one raise a year. If I stayed intil mext April 1st I would get another raise of 15 or 20 beans. Making at the most $100 per month. Well I have an opportunity to go to Dallas at $30 a week, to Topeka at $30 a week and to St. Louis at $30 a week or to start as an out side man for the United Press at $25 a week. And every fellow on the staff tells me that I am a fool to stay here. I have had a lot of valuable experience and have done some good work and have hit it pretty blame hard. And now Pop I am bushed! So bushed that I cant sleep nights, that my eyes get woozy, and that I am loosing weight and am tired all the time. I’m mentally and physically all in, Pop, and there isn’t any body Knows it better than myself. Look at it this way. It is as though I had gone to college and been under the strain of cramming for an examination for seven months straight. For that is the way it is. Responsibility, absolute accuracy, thousands of dollars hinge on your statements, absolute truth and accuracy. A middle initial wrong may mean a libel suit. And allways working under a strain.
This is what makes you mentally fagged. Having to write a half column story with every name, address and initial verified and remembering to use good style, perfect style in fact, an get all the facts and in the correct order, make it have snap and wallop and write it in fifteen minutes, five sentences at a time to catch an edition as it goes to press. To take a story over the phone and get evrything exact see it all in your minds eye, rush over to a typewriter and write it a page at a time while ten other typewriters are going and the boss is hollering at some one and a boy snatches the pages from your machine as fast as you write them. How long would a lot of people I know last at that before going wild. Or work from 8 am sat staright through to 1 sunday morning and then be so bushed you cant sleep. And remember Pop Ive been down here seven months and hadnt ever done anything more strenuous before in the line than have five or ten hours to ge[t] up a trapeze story.
I’ve got to have a vacation or bust and so on the first of May I am leaving on the Santa Fe [Railway] for Chicago. If you folks want me to I will be glad to spend a couple of days in O.P. [Oak Park]. And see youall again and all my old pals. But I cant stay more than a couple of days in Oak Park for I’m going way up North and work with my hands and rest and go fishing and give my buszing, cracking, bushed high tension, twin six brain a rest. When I get rested and all back I’m coming back. I can always come back to the Star and may get more money. They may not pay more because of their hide bound old policy but there are other papers in the country that will pay me what I am capable of earning. There is the greatest dearth of newspaper men now such as there never was in the world. A man with any experience can go into any paper in the country and go right to work. After the next draft there is going to be a still worse lack of men. I am not telling you just my own opinion but the facts from dozens of men. And when I am telling you about my ability to work on other papers I am quoting the men in the office, the city editor of the Times, Hopkins, Meyer of the Globe Dmocrat St. Louis said I could have a job down there whenever I wanted it. It seems blame funny that I that was writing for the Trapeze, bunk and bull should be doing some of the things I am now at my age. But it is so, and I am not telling you this because I think that I am any star or anything of the kind but just so you see the situation.
So Dad I hope to see you the second of May. Good luck and much obliged for the papers. Let me have a letter.
Ernie.
I’ll write Mother soon.
Ernie.


Though the United States formally entered W.W. I in April 1917, Hemingway’s bad left eye disqualified him from service. While at The Kansas City Star, he learned he could volunteer as an ambulance driver for the American Red Cross—which he did in March 1918. On the Italian front, he was hit by an Austrian trench mortar that left 200 pieces of shrapnel in his legs before a machine-gun round went through his right knee. Wounded, he carried an injured Italian soldier to safety and, soon after, he recuperated in the American Red Cross Hospital in Milan.


To the Hemingway family
ARC. Hospital
Milano
August 4th [1918]
Dear Folks—;
Mothers letter of July 8th, the day I was wounded, came day before yesterday. There isn’t a blame thing to write about because I’m still in bed and will be for a month or so.
The surgeon says that my leg is coming on very good and he plans now to operate on the knee and right foot on August 15th. I sure wish he would hurry up because it is very tiresome waiting in bed with the legs in splints. There was a big parade last Sunday and they took me out with my legs strapped to a board.

With a body guard of about six Italian officers I sat on the plaza and reviewed the troops. The crowd cheered me for about ten solid minutes and I had to take off my cap and bow about 50 times. They threw flowers all over me and every body wanted to shake my hand and the girls all wanted my name so they could write to me. The master journalist was known to the crowd as the American Hero of the Piave. I’m nothing but a second Lieut. or Soto Tenente but all the Captains saluted me first. Oh it was very thrilling. I tried to act very dignified but felt very embarrased.
I heard today that I had been recommended for the valour medal of the Duke of Aosta who is the brother of the King. That is the in addition to the silver medal which I have also been recommended for. The silver medal is next to the highest Decoration that any man can receive. I think it carries a pension with it but I’m not sure. Only 9 men have the highest decoration. The silver valour medal is corresponding to the Victoria Cross. It is higher than the French Croix D’Guerre and Medaille Militaire and ranks with the Legion of Honor they say.
I hope I am up and out soon so I may receive the one I have been recommended for. Usually they are presented by the King.
The rainbow trout up in Horton Bay [Michigan] can thank the Lord there is a war on. But they will be all the bigger next summer. Gee I wish I was up there fishing off the old dock …
Here’s looking at you all,
Lots of love to all and kiss Dessie [Leicester, Hemingway’s youngest sibling] for me.
Ernie.


In the months following his injury, Hemingway was in and out of hospitals; he fell in love with, and had his heart broken by, Agnes von Kurowsky, an American nurse he met in Milan and the model for Catherine Barkley in his 1929 novel, A Farewell to Arms; and he returned to the U.S. a war hero, hailed as the first American wounded in Italy.
He spent the summer of 1919 fishing and hunting in Michigan. Among his companions there was Howell Jenkins, a midwesterner with whom he had served in the Red Cross. The great outdoors, particularly in northern Michigan, would play an important role in Hemingway’s 1925 short-story collection, In Our Time, which concluded with “Big Two-Hearted River.” The narrative concerns a troubled young man who returns to the Michigan wilderness, where he uses the rituals of camping, Hemingway would later confirm in A Moveable Feast, to recover from the obscenities of war.


To Howell Jenkins
July 15, 1919
Dear Jenks,
I’m darned sorry I haven’t shot you a letter before but we have been tearing around so darn much and you know what a rotten correspondent I am. Bill [Smith, a childhood friend] and I were sure glad to know that you can come up in August. In regard to the boat way of coming the S.S. Manitou leaves from the municipal pier and comes direvt toCharlevoix [Michigan] where we will meet you. You can get the dope on the Manitou from the Northern Michigan Transportaion company agency at the Congress Hotel. You get the dope and then write us when you will be here and we will be at the dock. How does it seem to have Chicago dry [a reference to Prohibition]? It must be funny as hell—but then it will be wet again the first of October. Hope so anyway.
We have just been on a peach of a fishing trip for about a week over on the Pine Barrens. Fishing the Black River and camping. We went for five days without seeing a house or a clearing. Wild as the devil. Saw a bear on the Pidgeon River. That is where we want to go for a trip when you come up. We have all the fishing tackle so you don’t need to bother about anything of that kind. We took all the trout we wanted to eat and then on the last day we were there we caught 64 to bring home[.] Some of them were hellers [a wet fly used for fishing] too. We sure will have a good time there as there are swell camping places along the river. The river is all clear—no brush and fast as the deuce good wading all the way. And I believe it is the best trout fishing in the states. We can guarantee you all you want to catch.
There are some deer and some [b]ear and if you want to bring up your Austrian Carbine with some shells it might be a good hunch. It would be a darn good thing to have around camp if we did pipe another bear. There are lots of partridges and I have my twenty guage shot gun and a twenty two rifle. Anche [also] a 22 cal. Automatic pistol that is a whang.
We can fish the rainbow around the bay here for a while and swim and have a good time and trk over to Walloon lake and see my folks and then we can put in a week on the barrens. I think we can guarantee you a pretty good time. The Corp [nickname for Carlton Shaw, a fellow ambulance driver] wants to come up and I think we can get him for the barrens trip. YOu and I and Bill and the Corp wouldn’t make a bad gang?
If you can bring some grog up do it. Because I believe there is no danger. There is no search made aboard the boat and none at Charlevoix. Better bring up a couple of quarts.
We sure will be glad as hell to see you Jenks and Bill and I both and my family all send you their best.
Let me hear from you,
Hemmy

Back at his family’s summer home, in Petoskey, Michigan, Hemingway was soon kicked out for drinking and a suspicious moonlit picnic he held. He moved to Chicago, where he boarded with boyhood friend Yeremya Smith, whose sister, Katy, would introduce Hemingway to 28-year-old Hadley Richardson, a Missouri native in town after the death of her ailing mother. Hemingway and Hadley began writing each other and, by December 1920, they were exchanging letters almost daily; during their short, happy courtship, their correspondence would amount to more than 1,000 pages. The following letter, though missing at least one prior page, represents the earliest record of Hemingway writing to Hadley—as she burned most of his letters to her after their divorce, in 1927.


To Hadley Richardson, December 23, 1920
I’d be much happier too Hash [one of Hadley’s nicknames] Darling—but I can’t come— You see I hate and loathe and despise to talk about seeds [money] but I haven’t been home since 1915 I think and so I more or less threw a fairly decent Christmas for the kids and am consequently broke— Embarrassing of course. Could have much easier lied to you and mentioned acceptance of half a dozen New Years dates—all of which I’d have thrown out in a minute for a sight of you—but have always had this beautiful truth talking habit with you—
You can make me jealous—and you can hurt most awfully—’cause my loving you is a chink in the armour of telling the world to go to hell and you can thrust a sword into it at any time—
Hate to think of you going to the party with Dick [the brother of one of Hadley’s friends] instead of me—but I’m broke because of the Lord’s birthday! S’ Not a question of regard for seeds or anything you know—but why go into it?
Feel terribly bad—but I’ve shot my Toronto check—wont have another till the 15th of January—am in the intervening ones with Six members of the famille—
At present there’s someone or other snoring in the big bed—we threw quite a party to speed Saltzenbeck south. Gin hacks—Don [Wright, a friend] corked his Christmas Scotch and a bottle or so of port. I hate gin! Onct it done me wrong.
Saw tragedy tonight. I was in a drug shop opposite the Marigold Gardens [a beer garden on Chicago’s North Side] and a girl was telephoning in a booth. She was kidding some one over the wire, lips smiling. And talking cheerily away and all the time dabbing her eyes with a handkerchief— Poor kid it was terrible bad whatever it was.
Dear Hash you can surely hurt me a lot when you want to. About the platform and the train [he had declined to kiss her before her train left]. Lord— I thot I was loving you— If I wasnt I never could and never would love any one. Guess I was thinking too much about how I didn’t want you to go— Don’t you believe I love you? Dunno how I can make you believe.
I didn’t want to kiss you goodbye—that was the trouble— I wanted to kiss you good night—and there’s a lot of difference. ’ couldn’t bear the thought of you going away when you were so very dear and necessary and all pervading.

Suppose when you tell me how nice Dick is and so on I ought to counter with how enjoyable it is to dance with Maydlyn and how nice she looks top-side of a horse and so on—but when I think of anyone in comparison with you it’s like— You are so much dearer and I love you so much— that what odds kidding along about them.
’ Course I love you— I Love you all the time—when I wake up in the morning and have to climb out of bed and splash around and shave— I look at your picture and think about you—and that’s a pretty deadly part of day as you know and a good test of loving any one.
And in the evening— It’s too much to stand— Sure go on—go to the party with Dick but maybe once pretend I’m there—
’Night my dearest Hash— I’d like to hold you so and kiss you so that you wouldn’t doubt whether I wanted to or not—
Love you—
Sera [Night]
Ernesto

Eager to return to Europe, Hemingway had been trying to persuade the Toronto Star, where he was a freelancer, to send him to Italy as an overseas correspondent. But when he befriended Sherwood Anderson, in the spring of 1921, the American novelist advised him to go to Paris instead. Shortly after Hemingway and Hadley were married, on September 3, 1921, they sailed for France and, by the beginning of January, had found an apartment—financed with Hadley’s small inheritance—on Paris’s Left Bank.


To the Hemingway family, late January 1922
Dear Family—
Bones [another of Hadley’s nicknames] and I are living up here at about 3,000 feet above sea level and having the most gorgeous time. Paris got sort of damp and rotten weather so we came down here in the Alps to get rid of our colds and get healthy. It is Les Avants, above Montreaux on Lake Geneva and wonderful mountain sports. We get an all day ticket on the little railroad and then coast down the mountain on a bob and take the train back up. With an all day ticket you can take as many rides on the train as you want. The Bob is only big enough for two and has a steering wheel and brakes and goes all the way down the mountain through the wildest country you ever saw. Black forests of Pine trees and gorges and the big mountain Dent du Jaman. Snow is forty inches deep but you are never cold. Wear only sweaters and the air is bracing. The bob gets a speed of sixty miles an hour on some of the streches and there isn’t a single stop till you hit the railway s[t]ation at the bottom. You ought to see us come down with Hash steering. She thinks it is a sign of cowardice to ever put on the brake! I use it every once in a while on account of the fine way it makes the slivers of ice fly up. On the curves you have to lean straight out to keep from going over and you skirt sheer drop offs for miles. It is the greatest sport I’ve ever had I’m doing a lot of work too an this morning wrote two articles for the [Toronto] Star and sent them off while Hash was coasting with Dorothy Beck a nice American girl that is down here. We are staying at a place that is about like Dilworth’s prices and all and have enormous meals twice a day. Drink lots of milk all the time and both Hash and I are getting into splendid shape. You leave Paris at 9 o’clock at night and are at Montreaux at ten the next morning. Montreaux, you remember, is right near the Chateaux Chillon. Both of you have probably been there Dad and Mother. All of you would be mad about the coasting. There is skiing too and mountain climbing and skating but the coasting is the most fun. We make a twelve mile run in about 14 minutes! Beck is the only American here—she came down with us—all the rest are English Lawds. Very nice and fun to hoot at as you race with the bobs.
Hash just came in and read this over my shoulder an says to send lots of love to you and tell you about our apartment. It is at 74 Rue duCardinal Lemoine. And is the jolliest place you ever saw. We rented it furnished for 250 francs a month, about 18 dollars and have a femme du menage [housekeeper] who cooks dinner for us every night. I think I wrote you about it, so I won’t go on, You can send mail there and it will reach us. It is the most comfortable and cheapest way to live and Bones has a piano and we have all our pictures up on the walls and an open fire place and a peach of a kitchen and a dining room and big bed room and dressing room and plenty of space. It is on top of a high hill in the very oldest part of Paris. The nicest part of the Latin quarter. Just back of the Pantheon and the Ecole Polytechique. It has a tennis court right across the street and a bus line ends in the square around the corner so that you can get anywhere in the city. We were having an awfully good time in Paris, [b]ut the weather was so rotten that we were glad to come down here. It;s only seven dollars away from Paris. We came down here two days after we got settled and everything unpacked in the apartment so that we could go back to a place with no packing and work. For this trip we only brought rucksacks and a big suit case. Had some knickers made for Bones at the best man’s tailor in Paris and they fit her wonderfully. She has a big white sweater with a roll collar and a white tam with an orange stripe. I put all that in for the females in the family.
You would be amazed how warm you are when it is so cold. We haven’t had coats on since we were here and none of the men, hardly, wear hats. It is the healthiest and the nicest place you ever clapped a dead light on.
Bones and I both send you our love and to Grandmother, Grandfather, Aunt Grace and all of Uncle George’s family. Hope to get some letters from you soon.
Love,
Ernie and Hadley
[Hadley adds:]
P.S. Dear Family:—
Here we are filling our lungs with the cold dry air of the Swiss Alps and hiking and bobbing all day long—at night we are so weary we tumble into our beds, pull up the immaculate white feather beds—and drop off into the deepest sleep that doesn’t break till they come in to light the stove and lamp at 8 o’clock in the morning. Breakfast in bed! Then a little reading or talking then out on the roads again or shopping in Montreux. We are feeling fitter each day— Hope to hear a little gossip about the family doings soon.
Always devotedly
Hadley

Shortly before the couple set off for Europe, Anderson had provided Hemingway with letters of introduction to the city’s celebrated expatriate elite—Shakespeare and Company owner Sylvia Beach (who was first to publish the entirety of James Joyce’s Ulysses, in February 1922), Gertrude Stein, and Ezra Pound. The following letter places Hemingway’s first meeting with Stein earlier than previously believed.


To Grace Hall Hemingway
February 14 [and 15] 1922
Paris—
Dear Mother—
Dads letter of Feb 2 came today—a very fast crossing. It must have made the [ocean liner] Aquitania. What boat a letter comes on makes any amount of difference in the time we get it. Hash had a lovely letter from you that she is going to answer soon. She’s in a great spell of working on the piano now and isnt writing at all. She is very well and strong and healthy.
Lately I’ve had a rotten cold and have been feeling very foul but as soon as we get some spring here it will clear up. We know a good batch of people now in Paris and if we allowed it would have all our time taken up socially; but I am working very hard and we keep plenty of time to ourselves. It is fun living in this oldest quarter of Paris and we have a wonderful time. Paris is so very beautiful that it satisfies something in you that is always hungry in America.

I have such a cold in my head that it is quite impossible to think or write consecutively. That stuffed out moist but stupid feeling you know.

Gertrude Stein who wrote Three Lives and a number of other good things was here to dinner last night and stayed till mid-night[.] She is about 55 [Stein was, in fact, 48] I guess and very large and nice. She is very keen about my poetry— My Corona typewriter is being repaired. The femme de menage knocked [it] off my writing table while she was cleaning and I dont get it until tomorrow
Next day—

Madame came in yesterday while I was writing to clean the room and so I had to stop. Got the typewriter today again. Lunched this noon at the weekly luncheon of the Anglo-American newspaper men’s association. Tomorrow I’m getting four stories off to the Star and will have to work hard all day. Hash, who is now called Binney, is going shopping for a spring hat and a fur piece for her neck to we[a]r in the spring eith a suit and dresses as soon as she leaves off her coat.
Tell Dessie and Nubbins [Carol, Hemingway’s youngest sister] that we are living just two blocks away from the Jardin des Plantes which has the largest zoological gardens in the world. There are hundreds of animals and birds Oinbones has never seen before. Mountain goats from the Atlas mountains with horns that are curl three feet long and funny whiskers on their front legs. All sorts of hawks and eagles from South America and Africa and all sorts of South African animals. There is a big cage too full of Condors that have awful naked heads and red eyes and black wings twelve feet wide. It is the most wonderful collection of birds and animals I have ever seen and all thr cages are outdoors. There is a snake house that is as big as the largest building in the Lincoln Park Zoo.

Friday we are going to tea at Ezra Pounds. He has asked me to do an article on the present literary state of America for the Little Review. Binney [Hadley] is reading Lytton Strachey’s Queen Victoria while I am writing this. You will enjoy it if you have not read it all ready.

I am sorry to write such dull letters, but I get such full expression in my articles and the other work I am doing that I am quite pumped out and exhausted from a writing stand point and so my letters are very commonplace. If I wrote nothing but letters all of that would go into them. You know what [Gustave] Flaubert said, “The artist must [the actual quotation reads, “One should”] live like a bourgeois and think like a demi-god.”

I hope you are very well and haveing a good time. Give my love to Dad and all the kids and the family. I’m writing Dad shortly. The stamps on this are for Carol with my love.
Ever so much love,
Ernie

Ezra Pound and Hemingway met over tea in the poet’s home on the Left Bank in the spring of 1922. The two struck a deal in which Hemingway would teach Pound how to box in exchange for Pound sending some of Hemingway’s poems for consideration to The Dial, a prestigious literary magazine. Pound’s patronage was of little help, however, and after repeated rejections from The Dial and pretty much everywhere else, Hemingway’s first significant publication—a fable entitled “A Divine Gesture”—came in the May 1922 issue of The Double-Dealer, a New Orleans journal, and another piece in the following issue—a short poem that ran beside a piece by a promising southern writer named William Faulkner.


To Ezra Pound, November 8, 1922
Wednesday Night—
Dear Ezra—
I was tricked into a very childish position by being forced to defend my journalese, which I recognize is journalese, from the charge of being journalese. It was all silly.
I assed myself beautifully trying to save Steffen’s [Lincoln Steffens, a muckraking journalist] feelings by standing up for the weaknesses in my stuff which Steff admires because they are what he has always been shooting at. There is little gained being snotty to sweet old men.

I’m quitting the sheet [the Toronto Star]. (This is between us.) I know what I’m after in prose, now anyway, (meaning for the present) and hope to give you a couple of samples of it at the end of six months. If it is no fucking good I’ll know it and praise by Steffens, Mrs. Butler, George Horace Lorimer, Paul Rosenfeld, Bill Bird, Warren G. Harding, H.L. Menken, Pussyfoot Johnson, Dave O’Neil, Eugene O’Neil, Florence O’Neil, Rose O’Neil, Mother MacCree, Rudyard Kipling, Clare Sheridan, Max Eastman, John Quinn, John Drew, John Wanamaker, Malcolm Cowley, or Leticia Parker will cut no bloody ice.

Meantime I appreciate that you stuck me on the Three Mountains [Press] dodger out of friendship and think I ought to leave you know that I will not attempt to crab the act, bust up the show or detonate in any other way if you now regret having publicly backed some one who you realize has nothing worth printing and want to yank me out of the sextette.
You have my blessing Missou [monsieur]. I still think you are the only living poet altho. I am glad to read Herr Elliot’s adventure away from impeccability [reference to T. S. Eliot’s “The Waste Land”]. If Herr Elliot would strangle his sick wife, buggar the brain specialist and rob the bank he might write an even better poem.
The above is facetious.
See you tonight—
Hem

Over the next year, Hemingway would publish Three Stories and Ten Poems, his first short-story collection. In the summer of 1923, upon Gertrude Stein’s suggestion, he would travel with Hadley to Pamplona for the running of the bulls, the festival that would serve as the milieu for his first novel, The Sun Also Rises, published in 1926.

Sunday, July 17, 2011

Five Favorite Books on Writing

There are some worthwhile books out there on writing. I am often asked which ones are my favorites, if any. Such books usually fall into two catagories – the craft of writing and the business of writing. Few seem to combine both topics. The most important thing about writing and becoming a writer is to actually write. And then write some more. It's a muscle that needs to be exercised repeatedly. There are, however, a few books I would recommend that can provide helpful information to any writer, new or experienced.

Here is a list of my five favorite books on writing:

The Devils' Guide to Hollywood – Joe Eszterhas. Both a novelist and highly paid screenwriter, this outspoken Hungarian penner of movies (Flashdance, Basic Instinct, FIST, Showgirls, etc.) doesn't mince any words. Great behind the scenes tidbits and writing advice. The epilogue, detailing the Hollywood rollercoaster ride of a script he wrote called “Sacred Cows”, about the president of our good ole US of A getting caught...well, let's just say, getting too up close and personal with a certain farm animal, is alone well worth the price of admission.

On Writing – Stephen King. What needs to be said? The master. While this contains much autobiographical information, including his struggles with alcohol and drug abuse, the writing advice it contains is precious. Honest, insightful and practical advice on everything from word choice to editing to creating back story. He also provides examples of his own bad writing.

Hollywood Animal – Joe Eszterhas. This book concentrates on – at nearly 800 pages! - the experiences of his early years as a novelist and journalist, but the bulk details his years as a Hollywood screenwriter from an insider's perspective. Hilarious stories about the studio system, agents, star egos, etc. For example, when he wrote FIST, Sylvester Stallone was trying to take credit as “co-writer”. However, when the film bombed, Stallone then tried to distance himself from the story. A thick book, but a quick read.

Save The Cat! - Blake Snyder. This author, who passed away last year, breaks down scriptwriting to a formula. His beat sheet explains when certain events should happen (set-up, catalyst, debate, midpoint, dark night of the soul, etc.) and on what pages. He provides examples of movies that successfully used this formula. His produced scripts include Blank Check and Stop, Or My Mom Will Shoot – not exactly classics – and he gets down on Momento for not following “the formula” and makes notw of it's low box office take, but Christopher Nolan has done rather well for himself. Overall, however, an interesting book with good pints and great advice on what to avoid in a script.

The 101 Habits of Highly Successful Screenwriters – Karl Iglesias. Very helpful book that details, from the mouths of successful writers, advice on getting an agent, creating a writing environment, perseverance, writer's block, networking, etc. Though it's focused on screenwriting, much of the advice is applicable to fiction writing.

Until next time, in the words of John Steinbeck, “Writers are a little below the clowns and a little above the trained seals.”

Sunday, July 10, 2011

Paying Attention to the World Around Us

As writers, it is crucial to observe our environments. Think about it – if you were writing a drama that took place in a prison, how best to learn the “lingo”? Daily survival tactics? What life is really like in the big house? You can either commit a crime and get sent to prison (not recommended), or interview current and former inmates and study written accounts of prison life. The important thing is to get first hand knowledge for authenticity. Even if your work might take place in an alternative universe, it would still be helpful to know details about actual prison life. You never know what might come in handy. This involves observing – digesting – any and all relevent information you can find.

Listening to the way people talk is also a great way to develop an ear for dialogue. I have been fortunate to travel around the country and just overhearing the way different people from age 2-100 speak - their vocabularies, slangs, rhythms of speech – has been an invaluable tool. I have used actual lines of speech in various stories and scripts that I have overheard or via people-watching. “Real” life stuff I never would have had at my disposal otherwise. In airports, restaurants, on city streets or in a rural “one-horse” town, it doesn't matter. Everywhere you go is an opportunity to take notes – mental or actual – to use as a reference. And, one thing I've learned, when you least expect it, you'll recall one of those characters or the way someone dressed or what he/she said, and it will fit it well with a project you are writing.

Many writers at the beginning of their careers don't do enough observing or listening to the world around them. Remember – as writers, we are constantly filtering our environments though us on a daily basis, whether we are conscious of it or not. Observe and Listen. You'll be a better writer for it.

Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Chapter One posted

Here I have posted the first chapter of my novel "The Only Living Man With A Hole in His Head".  Beginning in 1867 when Dr.  John Harlow, the doctor who treated Phineas for his brain injury, traveled from Boston to San Francisco, seven years after his patient's death, to exhume the skull and the tamping iron that he had been buried with. The Gage family had consented to the request. Doing so would be the only way Dr. Harlow could prove that the injury did occur as he had reported it. He would dramatically present the skull, tamping iron and his case notes at the 1868 Massachusetts Medical Society conference in front of the many colleagues whom had ridiculed him for his findings regarding Phineas Gage nearly two decades earlier. Enjoy!
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CHAPTER ONE
December, 1867
San Francisco, California


It was not that Dr. John Martyn Harlow enjoyed digging up

corpses, and, in fact, in his forty-nine years, that would be only

his second exhumation, but sometimes a man had to disturb the 

resting bones of another man. It was the right thing to do for the 

right reason. That had included journeying to San Francisco, not on one

railroad, for it would be two additional years, in 1869, that the

entire territory of the United States would be linked by

uninterrupted rail line, but rather having to transfer between four

separate lines to arrive at the fast growing city by the bay. As Dr.

Harlow, attired in a choice suit custom made by one of Boston's

finest tailors, scanned the horizon, and its port with the neat row

of wooden buildings along the shore, each one belching smoke from a

coal stove, he found it hard to consider that hardly twenty months

prior, the whole area had been rocked by a major earthquake. None of

the folks back in Dr. Harlow or the dead man's hometown in rural

Vermont could much comprehend what an earthquake even felt like. But

there, on October 8, 1865, as one of the newspapers reported, there

existed "scarcely a house in the city that does not show some mark of

the visitation, in cracked walls, open joints, flaked plaster, or a

cranky position and many of the old heavy brick structures are so

shaken up and twisted as to be dangerous to the occupants".

Dr. Harlow, thin and slightly haunted looking, his neat salt-and-

pepper beard more salt than pepper with each passing birthday,

thought about how appropriate the miserable weather was for the scene

playing out before him. Rainy, cold, the foggy morning lent Laurel

Hill Cemetery a more macabre aura than usual. The final resting place

of numerous citizens, wealthy and poor alike, which would fittingly

include the grave of Andrew Halladie, famed inventor of the cable

car, so associated with the metropolis, the fifty-four acre graveyard

also served as a place where families would picnic and young couples

would promenade among the dead.

Moisture softened the dirt into mud, making it appear as if it

were a giant cake batter waiting to be mixed. A dampness that seemed

to permeate every cell of his body the way he had seen Scarlet Fever

do so in many of his unfortunate patients.

The grave diggers went about their work diligently. Dr. Harlow

was acquainted with the knowledge that many corpses were being dug up

to be sold to medical schools as cadavers. It was a lucrative

endeavor, but one that he did not approve of. As he watched the men

work, he wondered if they were indeed part of the grisly trade. That

was not his main concern, at least at the moment.

SWACK! Another fresh shovelful of mud was tossed aside.

Holding an umbrella, Dr. Harlow stood impatiently with two other

men.

"Just how long will this be, Harlow?" Judge Johnson, the older of

the men, between coughs, inquired.

"Does the act of digging up a corpse creep you out, Judge?" Dr.

Harlow asked.

The Judge, one of San Francisco's most respected public officials

and a person whose social butterfly wife, Lilly, appeared to know

everybody who was anybody in the whole region, simply stated, with

disdain, "Certainly not. I shall have other commitments to attend

to."

Whether or not we approve, death is a natural part of the cycle

of life,” the physician's observation fell on indifferent ears.

The third observer, David Shattuck, took it all in stride. He

freely held a flask which he'd take a sip from every so often. Not

that it was a party or a celebration or anything like that that he

was attending. After all, it was his kin whose bones were being so

thoroughly disturbed. Nor was he an excessive drinker who could throw

'em down real good - at least not anymore.

SWACK! Dr. Harlow's ears perked up at the sound of a shovel as it

hit wood.

The Judge impulsively shoved a legal document into David's hand,

as if he were clutching a piece of cloth ablaze and couldn't wait to

get it out of his age-spotted fingers. "It's official," the Judge

coughed some more, "he's exhumed." That was not climate for a man

with a cold.

David stared at the legal papers and uttered, "Thank you, Your

Honor."

Again, one of the grave diggers forcefully bore down his shovel,

hitting and splintering wood.

"For God's sake!" Dr. Harlow cried out. "Be careful." Those men

were acting like they were participating in a log-splitting contest.

David took another swig from his trusty flask, extended it via

his hand to Dr. Harlow, an edgy man who did not seem to notice the

bottle at all.

The pair of grave diggers, both youthful men, typical of the

profession that was populated by those who were unskilled at little

else or had yet to take on a respectable apprenticeship, took pride

in the fact that former president Abraham Lincoln himself had once

worked in the trade. Matthew, the stronger of the two, knelt beside

the heavy coffin to tie a thick rope around its handles. Then he

hopped out of the freshly dug burial space. Taking rope in hand, the

grave diggers attached it to the saddles of the two standby muscular

horses and slapped their rumps.

"He's been dead for seven years," Judge Johnson barked. "What

could you possibly hope to find?"

"I hope to find the truth," Dr. Harlow spoke with truthfulness.

In what gave the impression of occurring as fast as a bolt of

lightning hitting a tree, the rope slipped off the coffin, which then

began a perilous slide down six feet of mud, eliciting a "For God's

sake!" cry from Dr. Harlow. As the one closest to it, the healer

immediately dived to his knees to grab the handle to slow the

crashing fall, but the weight of the coffin dragged him with it. Part

of the coffin cracked open, as if an egg shell dropped carelessly by

a child onto a kitchen floor - "DAMN!", was the only word that

streaked in the good doctor's mind - and the bones of a foot came

protruding out. Dr. Harlow flashed a wicked grin at the grave

diggers, who, without hesitation, leaped back into the grave to re-

attach the rope.

Moments later, in the compact cemetery hut, lit by lantern, the

thundershowers heavier and splashing annoyingly through holes in the

roof, Dr. Harlow and David watched as the grave diggers removed the

bulky lid. Full of anticipation, the out-of-towner could feel his own

heartbeats as pronounced as the precipitation that fell on him. The

corpse came into view. David took another gulp from his flask as he

noted how rotted to black the remains had become. Perhaps his

brother-in-law being dug up like a deep-rooted bush wasn't such a

wise idea after all. Then again, it had been his mother-in-law's

decision. His presence was purely as the law required to be "the

family member of record" to witness and receive the documentation of

said disinterment.

Dr. Harlow, at once saddened by the sight of his deceased friend

and former patient, but also elated at what the opportunity would
mean for the medical world, carefully touched the head. His fingers

gently glided to the top of the cranium, ending at a large lump.

Memories of two decades earlier came flooding back, swimming like a

school of minnow in his mind. This was, however, not the appropriate

time to reminisce. David nudged him, "Doctor Harlow?"
"David. You're second kin," Dr. Harlow stated as he regained his

composure, "By law, well, I won't force you. Do you want to?"

"I reckon it's only fitting."
David positioned himself at the top of the coffin. He had to be

strong, not physically, but emotionally, spiritually, that was

the important thing. Not a religious person by any stretch of the

imagination, David yet felt that a higher power did govern the

Universe and surely there was a purpose for his standing in the

cemetery at that moment in time about to do the unthinkable. David

placed a hand on each side of the cranium and, in one rapid motion,

with Dr. Harlow holding the body down, twisted off the head, the

movement punctuated with a creaking sound.

"You feeling right?" Dr. Harlow asked as David handed him an open

hat box filled with cotton.

Passing the skull to Dr. Harlow, he mumbled, "Right as rain."

Dr. Harlow, cradling the precious cargo, nestled it in the bed of

white. Suddenly, the notion of something missing came over him like a

cold shiver. The physician with the once dry turned soggy garments

snapped his own head back toward the open coffin. "Where is it?", he

demanded of no one in particular. Dr. Harlow, who began to search

frantically, broke off a piece of coffin wood, then impulsively

tossed it aside. "Not here. I know he was buried with it."

David indulged himself another comfort sip from his trusty flask

as he and the soiled grave diggers looked at one another, confused.

Had this visitor from back east gone mad? Had he contracted the much

feared Scarlet Fever, possibly from one of his patients? Was the

stress of what he was doing getting to him?

Dr. Harlow grabbed the lantern and peered into the coffin. "It

simply must be...A HA!" A partial smile of relief adorning his face,

he lifted up a Tamping Iron, and what an impressive rod it was -

three feet in length, one-half inch in diameter, weighing thirteen

pounds, one end pointed, the other with a crowbar tip. The perfect

tool for a railroad foreman to have in his arsenal. Taking it in one

hand, Dr. Harlow absentmindedly rested his other on the decayed body

in the coffin.

"Extraordinary," David blurted out.

The grave diggers watched restlessly. To them, this was just

another gig. Just another corpse in just another coffin in just

another cemetery. No questions asked. That was, as long as they 

were paid in gold coins, preferably, or good old US of A currency.

Finally, one of them asked, "Sir, shall I remove the remains?"

Dr. Harlow could hardly take his eyes from the Tamping Iron, but

managed to reply, "That's quite all right. I have what I came for. Do

you mind finishing? I haven't much time to prepare it for the 

train ride."

"I'll put him to with what dignity is left him."

The healer placed the cover on the box and proceeded to carry

both the head and the Tamping Iron out of the hut.